on identifying with Pluto, (which is no longer a planet)
October 20, 2007
what would I talk about
if I didn’t have you to write to?
with all your rules and judgments
and pronouncements on the word
who would I be?
what would I think if
I didn’t have a you in my head
to speak to
each day, each second
you watch over me
and criticize the impulses
you screech nasty when I’m down
you soothe soft when I’m up
but always with your voice
I’m scrambling the scale
who would you be
if there was no traitor at the start?
just some observer
a silent witness noticing
my human-ness
somebody nice
calm, easy
non
conflicted
?
October 20, 2007 at 4:29 pm
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November 16, 2007 at 1:55 am
This is outstanding, Cinnette.
I can relate to this big time.
(Put you on my roll)
- Mark
November 16, 2007 at 10:21 am
cool. thank you Mark. we’ll be blog buddies.
hey, what the heck is that first comment up there?
November 16, 2007 at 11:10 am
I don’t know for sure what that is. It ultimately links back to some kind of collection of other blog entries.