once i knew a girl
October 19, 2008
she was named Brooklyn
and she had bruises
that were your signature
what do you do after the x wears off?
“more x!!”
but it was 9am and the sun was blazing
not that any of us cared
but me with my teeth to your neck
insisting i was not jealous
and she had bruises
that were your signature
what do you do after the x wears off?
“more x!!”
but it was 9am and the sun was blazing
not that any of us cared
but me with my teeth to your neck
insisting i was not jealous
except, i was
October 19, 2008 at 7:42 pm
Considering the situation…it would be natural to be jealous.
Cool writings, and hope you keep up!
In love,
joyfulpraisegirl
November 3, 2008 at 7:35 pm
I like the turn to the immediate — it’s visceral.